tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8386436012700262207.post6568338865732978126..comments2023-09-18T21:38:10.423+08:00Comments on Whatever You Say I Am: By The Water #2anak pak manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00676137847801027758noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8386436012700262207.post-35384260284135227532011-02-20T04:34:30.348+08:002011-02-20T04:34:30.348+08:00Salaam,
very nice writing so far, mashaAllah. (I&...Salaam,<br /><br />very nice writing so far, mashaAllah. (I'm marathon-ing all the parts tonight, short stories on blogs are my favourite. ^^)<br /><br />Am I allowed to correct your spelling at all? :P "There were really good" <-- "They were really good", riiight?Aneesahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07985858762130007644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8386436012700262207.post-74702175764547692782011-02-19T00:18:26.865+08:002011-02-19T00:18:26.865+08:00No offence :) and I hope you take this as a constr...No offence :) and I hope you take this as a constructive criticism. The storyline is interesting but honestly, your style of writing is quite plain. You should add.. more colours to it. Figuratively that is. I know you can do better than this. <br /><br />Keep it going though :)anonauthorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09596175394585880597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8386436012700262207.post-38413945765662856512011-01-29T13:14:34.164+08:002011-01-29T13:14:34.164+08:00Jo,
hehe, thanks! I'll try to keep you guys ha...Jo,<br />hehe, thanks! I'll try to keep you guys happy.. :Danak pak manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00676137847801027758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8386436012700262207.post-74823360688975107052011-01-29T11:51:51.692+08:002011-01-29T11:51:51.692+08:00hi anwar! its been a while..been reli bz l8ly..lik...hi anwar! its been a while..been reli bz l8ly..like i said, wait patiently & my comment wil appear 1 day =)<br />i got interested in " By the water " especially in d 2nd episode..haha, well, jo wil try her best 2 b a loyal reader of ur short story..keep up d nice work! :DJohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099713560071449875noreply@blogger.com